"Guess who's back..... back again.... (Ba)Zingang's back, tell a friend." Yes! That's right reader Bazingang is back for post #5 for this blog! And we're back better than ever! Why you ask? Because we've been really motivated as of late to make this blog better than it was before, and we're making the posts a little bit more humorous. Anyway, let's begin.
After a very close election race to see who would become President of the Philippines and it came down to a four-way tie between Mass,Schmuck,IfFoundPleaseReturn and Bella. And because of this four-way tie, for the first time in Philippine History, the Philippines has four Presidents at the same time! Bazinga! Just kidding, we're not the Presidents of the Philippines but what if we were the Presidents of the Philippines? Now, imagine this.......
The Philippines has no power and your only option to power the country is to open the BNPP to stop the power drought. Simple right? Nope, not really. The reason of this is that there is a nest of turtles that is very near the Power Plant. And if a worker in the power plant, then Houston, we've got a problem. The population of turtles is very low and it can't afford to get worse and if the Power Plant malfunctions then it will already lessen the dwindling population of turtles! But then again, if we open the BNPP, the electricity is cheaper and there will be more than enough energy for many. And because we're the "Presidents", we have to make a decision and we have. Drumroll please..... *ratatatatatatatata*..... we will SAVE THE TURTLES! This was a very tough decision to make, but in the end we think it's for the best for our country because if one accident happens in the plant, animals and humans will be harmed and it will have long term effects on the environment.
THE MATCH RECAP
The Bataan Nuclear Power Plant
VERSUS
The Turtles
Now, we go to Judges' score cards after that very close match-up between the BNPP and the Turtles. Judges 1 and 2 scored the fight 50-45 while judges 3 and 4 scored the fight 49-48. And the winner by Unanimous Decision is..... The Turtles!
Sources: http://www.quickmeme.com/Surprised-Sheldon-Cooper
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Konnichiwa Bazingang! Here are your scores for the fifth post:
ReplyDeleteContent - 9/10
Coherence - 5/5
Creativity - 5/5
Voice - 5/5
Mechanics - 4/5
Text Layout - 5/5
Graphics and Multimedia - 5/5
Intellectual Honesty - 5/5
TOTAL: 43/45
Your post was written creatively and I like that. However, some sentences are missing a comma. There are way more advantages and disadvantages of opening BNPP, so I think you need to list more. There's also a sentence that doesn't make sense to me:
"And if someone in the Power Plant, then Houston, we've got a problem."
What do you mean by "someone in the power plant"? Also, power plant is a common noun. You can also add an ending to the post. I hope you'll do well in the last post!
Bye!
-More Like SCIENCE (Rosie-desu)
I created a monster.
ReplyDeleteSo here is your score:
Content - 9/10
Coherence - 5/5
Creativity - 5/5
Voice - 4/5
Mechanics - 4/5
Text Layout - 5/5
Graphics & Multimedia - 5/5
Intellectual Honesty - 5/5
Comments - 6/10
Peer - 43/45
TOTAL: 91/100